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OOPS! in Coop #5

These corrections are humbling.  They were brought to my attention by my sister-in-law Leanne.  I wrote in the book I couldn’t bring myself to discuss the details with her and my brother, but I should have.  She was very polite and kind about it, but still.

On page 269, I wrote that the fire chief put Jed and Leanne in his truck.  Leanne says the chief actually drove them in Leanne’s vehicle.

Regarding page 273, Leanne says that although she was carrying Jake during her initial firefighting class, he was born shortly thereafter and she thinks the instructor was actually referring to his surprise when Leanne turned up one week after Jake’s birth, fire gear in hand, ready to continue and finish the class.  Still — I think we can all agree — remarkable.

Finally, Leanne says she is not sure there was a heartbeat.

There are writerly lessons in all of this.  But above all, I want to do right by my family, because they are patient with me and did not ask to be (in fact would in most cases prefer to avoid being) written about.  That Leanne would take the time to read something so personally painful and then respond in such a thoughtful manner only reinforces something I try to remind myself of daily: before the writing, before the books, before any of it, there is family.  And I’m blessed with a fine one.

OOPS! in COOP #4

This one makes me feel bad.  My parents are very private folks.  The fact that I write about them is a big presumption on my part.  Tonight my Mom called me.  She just saw the book and noticed that the copy on the inside dust jacket flap says my parents have taken in “over 100 foster children.”  Mom says it was more like 60 or so (she quit keeping track around that number), and when I checked the text of the book on page 86 that’s exactly what I wrote (“sixty or so”).  I’m pretty sure what happened is I put 100 in as a placeholder early on and it got left in a lot of the promotional material after I changed it in the main text.  So.  For the sake of my Mom, and just in case I get called out on Oprah, let it be known this mixup is completely on me.

OOPS! in COOP #3

On page 307.  Should be Buster Keaton, not Harold Lloyd.  I found this one myself…after the book was in print, unfortunately.

OOPS! In COOP #2

A reader named Lisa has found an oops! in Coop.  On page 186 I write of my father driving east on I-94 to St. Paul, Minnesota, which is tough to do when you’re coming from Wisconsin.  Because of the way the sentence is written, I could argue that I was talking about the return trip home, but I can’t lie: In my head I was facing west and it is a plain-and-simple oops!.

Here is my policy on oops!es.

Memory and Myth

*Sigh*  I have been known to go on and on about the critical nature of attention to factual accuracy in nonfiction writing.  So it is with a certain amount of friendly egg on my face that subsequent to this recent post I have had a discussion with the Julie in question and not only does she deny that she was wearing rhinestone glasses and a vintage black slip when we met in prison (vintage grey men’s pants, black turtleneck, men’s shoes, and tortoise-shell glasses, she says), she also reports that I have previously and alternatively described her as wearing a black mini-skirt rather than a black slip.

So.  I shall adjust the myth accordingly.  Having said that, you will understand my confusion should you actually obtain a copy of their new book and review the portrait in which Julie is loading hay in a vintage black…wait, I’m gonna go fact-check that.

OOPS! in COOP #1

So I just saw my first finished copy of the new book.  Found an error.  This happens.  The books go through rigorous edits, revisions, copyedits, proofreadings, and generalized scrutiny by a whole team of folks, but inevitably something slips through.  (Responsibility for this one, by the way, lies solely with the author.)  I don’t mind people pointing out errors (as long as they spare me the gotcha!).  In fact, when people draw my attention to these things I like to let everyone know.  This one is quite mild and hidden right in plain sight.  I’ll wait until the book hits the streets (after April 21) to see if anyone picks up on it.  We’ll file it (and any – fingers crossed – others) under the tag “oops!